The second attempt is a bit better. You seem to have a good variety of shot lengths, athough most of the angles you've drawn are on eye-line height. Try to mix it up a little for variety, and to tick the 'interesting angles' box. Also, there is a lack of ECU and CU shots - perhaps film some detailed shots of hands playing the guitar to remedy this, also to focus on the 'musial credentials' of your artist.
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I think we might need to rescan these at a higher resolution, or draw around the images in black so that they are visible.
The second attempt is a bit better. You seem to have a good variety of shot lengths, athough most of the angles you've drawn are on eye-line height. Try to mix it up a little for variety, and to tick the 'interesting angles' box. Also, there is a lack of ECU and CU shots - perhaps film some detailed shots of hands playing the guitar to remedy this, also to focus on the 'musial credentials' of your artist.
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